What Makes This Essay Effective?

This essay is an interesting and well-rounded overview on the academic preparation and interests of the applicant.

The unusual hook draws the reader in as they seek an answer to the questions posed. The story then lets the reader in on not just what the applicant has explored academically to prepare for college, but also on the kinds of unique questions she ponders (i.e. "If people stopped learning, would knowledge die?") as part of her preparation.