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  • Common Application Essays
    • Prompt 1: Background Story
    • Prompt 2: Experienced Failure
    • Prompt 3: Challenged Belief
    • Prompt 4: Showed Gratitude
    • Prompt 5: Personal Growth
    • Prompt 6: Intellectual Engagement
    • Prompt 7: Topic of Your Choice
  • Learning Modules
    • Common Application Main Essays Explained
    • Choosing Your Common App Main Essay Topic
    • Supplemental Essays & Topics Explained
    • EssayXL – Essential Essay Mechanics
    • Handling Your College Application
    • Admission Interview Preparation
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Module 1 Common Application Main Essays Explained
Module 2 Choosing Your Common App Main Essay Topic
Module 3 Supplemental Essays & Topics Explained
Module 4 EssayXL – Essential Essay Mechanics
Module 5 Handling Your College Application
Module 6 Admission Interview Preparation
Module 4
EssayXL – Essential Essay Mechanics
Effective Essays: Example 1

What Makes This Essay Effective? 

This essay is very impactful in that it shows so many things about the applicant to admissions.

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Explainer: Using the TDI Essay Method
TDI Outline Example 1: Leadership
TDI Outline Example 2: Community Service
TDI Outline Example 3: Failure
Founders Essay Magic Tricks
Using Effective Essay Hooks
Using Impact Sentences
Using Impactful Endings
Immediate Advantage & Better Essay Tips
Effective Essays: Example 1
Effective Essays: Example 2
Effective Essays: Example 3
Effective Essays: Example 4
Ineffective Essays: Example 1
Ineffective Essays: Example 2
Ineffective Essays: Example 3
Ineffective Essays: Example 4

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